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Shoot Me by ~FalseGod:iconFalseGod:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Teen or Young Romance > Open


I (can't) stand to see your face
I (can't) go on listening
You're my blade, my disgrace
I'm your creep, the one you're killing

"I love you too"
No, it wasn't your voice
I didn't want to crumble for you
but I never had that choice

Kill me with your eyes again
Drown me in depression
Hateful bliss, joyous pain
Masochistic existence, desired agression

Hurt me, please do it
Deny the completion of my need
My obsidian grave, I want to see it
Smother me, I don't want to breathe

I'm on your knees,
So you can shoot me
But I still need your lips...

Now pull the trigger
©2006-2009 ~FalseGod
:iconfalsegod:

Author's Comments

...so I wrote this after a friend of mine I really like cried of unhappiness and all that...I feel miserable.

Apologises for it sucking, as do my feelings

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~NeglectedDesign Feb 10, 2006, 7:14:47 PM
.. Again, you've taken the words from my heart and used a pen to paint them upon paper.
I love it.. I still hope things work out for you.. :+fav: :cling:
:iconfalsegod:
~FalseGod Feb 11, 2006, 2:53:27 AM
Thanks :hug:

the feeling is mutual

--
Nice shoes...wanna fuck? :jackdirt:

also ~DragonSeeker (drawings)
:icondre4m3r:
~Dre4m3r Feb 12, 2006, 1:21:06 PM
O teu poema foi como uma bala disparada directamente no meu coração...
Está um tremendo poema.

I <3 u*
:iconfalsegod:
~FalseGod Feb 13, 2006, 1:50:16 AM
so comments crl =D

--
Nice shoes...wanna fuck? :jackdirt:

also ~DragonSeeker (drawings)
:icongonahkar:
~Gonahkar Feb 13, 2006, 6:48:57 AM
Hmm..
Poerty these days are sooo sad..
i mean we combine love, passion, and hatered together..
i do that..soo..
i wonder why..
this is a good poem. How she kills you by love

I always had this theory that love and pain are million yards away..but it seems to be only a theory..they walk hand in hand!

--
Men want to be a Women's First Love
Women want to be Man's last Romance
:rose: :heart: :rose:

God created man first
because you always create a roughdraft
before a masterpeice
:iconfalsegod:
~FalseGod Feb 13, 2006, 8:48:04 AM
Three things:

- First: dankie ^^
- Second: To me, pain and love have always been together
- Third: It's not a "she"...

--
Nice shoes...wanna fuck? :jackdirt:

also ~DragonSeeker (drawings)
:icongonahkar:
~Gonahkar Feb 15, 2006, 5:19:48 AM
Oh...ok..
Your welcome

--
Men want to be a Women's First Love
Women want to be Man's last Romance
:rose: :heart: :rose:

God created man first
because you always create a roughdraft
before a masterpeice
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